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Sun May 17, 2009 5:05 pm
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Joined: 18 Oct 2008
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Location: Northampton, England
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If I was in charge of May's storylines I would have kept her entrance the same, however I would definitely change her exit storyline.
My idea is after May finds out that Dawn is pregnant with her husband, Rob, she immediately leaves the Square in tears, making Dawn believe that May has left the Square for good…
A couple of months later when Sophie is born, May hears the news that Rob and Dawn are set to marry, a sinister look and smirk appears on Mays face, she's got an idea...
A week or two later, May appears in the Square on the eve of the wedding...
The next day, Dawn and Rob both happily marry with friends and family around them, but May is nowhere to be found... where is she and what is she up to?
Later, all the residents of Albert Square are at the wedding reception in the Queen Vic congratulating the couple on their marriage, but unbeknown to them, a bomb has been planted in the toilets by May, and it's ticking...
About 15 minutes later, May drives into Albert Square with newly brought clothes and essentials for Sophie in the back seat. She takes out her mobile and dials a number, a few seconds later she says in a quite voice “Do it, now…”
Back in the Vic, Rob puts his mobile phone into his pocket, and unbeknown to Dawn, Rob has been in cahoots with May all this time!
When Rob tells Dawn that he is going to take Sophie home for a bottle of warm milk, he exits the Vic before approaching May’s car. May gets out the car, and holds Sophie in her arms before sighing and giving her massive a kiss and cuddle. Rob asks May where the three of them are going to go. May replies “You’ll have to wait and see…”
Rob and May's cunning plan is working, but May has one more trick up her sleeve…
May asks Rob to quickly go back in the Vic and get some bottles of water for their new journey. Rob, who believes what May has just said goes back into the pub.
May drives around the corner from the Square and after looking at the time, she gets out her mobile and rings Rob.
Rob, who has sneaked into the Vic, takes out his mobile before answering “What’s wrong May, do you need anything else?”
May replies “Goodbye Rob” before putting her mobile down, she turns around and faces the pub. After a brief grin appears on her face, the entire Square is rocked by a sudden, almighty explosion, the Queen Vic bursts into flames while debris is scattered all across the Square.
“Oops! Never mind…” replies May to Sophie who is asleep in her new child car seat before jetting off to sunny Spain where she is now living in a luxury house by the coast with a swimming pool, with her darling, precious Sophie.
Dum Dum DumDumDum...
I know it sound far fetched but I like it  |
Last edited by AmandaDrewFan on Sun May 17, 2009 9:04 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Sun May 17, 2009 5:38 pm
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i likee thatt onee  x |
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Wed May 20, 2009 7:31 am
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Location: Bristol, England.
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I love how you did the pictures aswell [April secretly is obsessed with the first picture  ]
I also like how May gets rid of Rob [thank goodness] she doesn't need him
I'm going to have to move this post to the 'fanfiction' thread but I will leave a shadow of this topic in the 'EastEnders' thread so it can ultimately be found there also.
[I'll comment properly on this topic laters, as I have to actually go to school LMAO...it's 7:30] |
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